Whether to accept a bad situation, or work on it to improve it, has been a topic of debate in our minds forever. A bad situation can be taken as an opportunity to test your strength to overcome hurdles in life, and also to see who are the real ones in our lives to help us out when we are actually in need. For instance, if you are broke and a friend lends you money, without any benefit of his own, that is when you know that he will be always there for you, no matter what.
Accepting a bad situation is only required until you are in it. Instead of blaming ourself for the crisis, just accept that it has happened and think about what can be done to overcome it. Idealize people’s stories to motivate yourself to move forward. For example, someone who worked a 9 to 5 job since years, suddenly realized that this is not what he wants to dobut has to do for a living. He quits the job and takes on his passion to earn a living. It may happen that he has less money initially, but at least he will be stress-free. He will be at peace because of that one moment that he decided to leave his old job and do what he actually loves.
There are a lot of inspiring stories aound us that makes us want to work hard and make a better lives for ourselves. I don’t think any of them were easy to achieve. Bad situations are like buses, they keep coming and going. It is totally upon us, whether we drop off at the right time to reach our destination. So, to conclude, accept a bad situation onlu till your in it, because once you get out of it, it will no more be bad situation but just a memory in our minds.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...or example, someone who worked a 9 to 5 job since years, suddenly realized that thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, as to, at least, for example, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09810126582 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25391779118 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1321483608 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141954371626 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520582100498 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484470213104 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103776010863 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212465605831 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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