It is generally considered that few masses opine that exercise is key to health whereas others ponder that having good nutrition is more crucial role. This essay will discuss both the views along with my perspective.
To commence with the former notion, exercise is the best way for long age of the person. To elaborate it, people do the exercise in the morning time or afternoon. Body is very flexible. Their mind is also very sharp and tension free with doing exercise. This is the hide reason for the long age. For instance, a survey was conducted by the (WHO) "WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION" found in the 2010 that 90% humans were live long age near about 80. Hence, their bones are very strong and they can work very hard.
On the other hand, best nutrition gives the free diseases body. To explain it , when the all individuals eat the fresh food and vitamins food with this they are grow fast and also they are far away from the harm disorder. They can fight with body problems. To epitome it, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that they are not surrounding by the sickness because their diet was best for their body. Therefore, they can digest the any kind of cuisine.
In conclusion, although with the exercise they can live very long age yet, i believe that good food and healthy food is the best path to grow and free diseases body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the best
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ercise they can live very long age yet, i believe that good food and healthy food...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70612244898 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42010616999 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575510204082 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.857325637 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112510363087 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397877617105 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563674044376 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869330164886 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905687012328 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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