Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable to say that we cant't stop the situation whethere it is good or bad, but we musk try to recover the situation to try our best. Many people thinks that we shiuld accept a worst situation such as poorness, unsatisfied jobs and shortage of money. While other people arguing that it is important to improve situation as much as we can. I personally believe with the laterer view that we must atleast try to improve situation rather accept it.
To begin with, Ther are numerous people who give up very easily even in small bad situation. They can't handle situations properly and they accept it that there are no changers have been occured in there's situation and lastly they accept situation and lives in bad situation. There are multiple examples of these situations such as scarcity of money due to poverty, unsatisfied with their job, and so on. Many people are lives in under poverty line and they can't even do for their bad situation. Sometimes they face plethora of problems such as they can't completig their study, they can't eat delicious food like us, and many more. Another noticable bad situation is that some people are not satisfied with their job because there are number of pepole in our society who are doing job for feeding their family and fulfill familys' demand. They can't do enjoy their job and at the end they suffer from many typr of depression and anxiety.
However, Other people believe that we can't put situation as it is. We must fight for it and put out ourselves from the bad situation. For example, india is a diverse country and there many people who live in bad situation before their golden days. Our indian cricketer Ms. Dhoni who was suffered multiple problems when he was a child and also before he became a successfull cricketer. He live in under poverty line but he decide to get rid out of this situation and he started hard work. He liked to became a cricketer but he didn't like the wicket keeping in cricket. But. coach said to Dhoni is that there was only one place left and that was wicket keeping so Dhoni pursued this particular field and look better days are coming for him and Today he is a successfull and brilliant cricketer.
Moreover, People who don't like to do their job and also unsatisfied with their job, they must try to get outr from this situation rather then putting themselves under pressure. Many People in India and also in other countries they are doing multiple jobs in a day. In this situation, there are plethora of problem solving reasons such as to spen quality time with theur family, spend time with their near ones and dear ones. Many people who are doing freelancing to get out from their job and also we have to hustle hard to get out form this kind of soituartion. Many people are leave their jobs and starting their own business to complete their dreams and to live a luxuries life.
In the all conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that tough time comes to everyone but we have to hustle hard to get out from the bad situation. It is too much important to take stands for our dreams and to put a happy smile in our family members and dear ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 24.0651302605 324% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 568.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5985915493 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33730686311 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426056338028 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4497515444 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.48 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.72 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266362902735 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908985975051 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774463720126 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156014431375 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117028342512 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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