In the human life, We come across various types of situations.Some of them are towards positive side while others are its opposite. Nevertheless, Few people believe that we have to get adjusted with all types of worst conditions.While others believe that we should improvise the situation rather getting a adapting to it.
To embark on, Individuals face various issues in their day- to -day life. Problems may be like complications in working place, Financial crisis, Personal life issues,So on. Some of them believe that we should get tuned to our bad conditions thinking that it can not be solved. Also, solving such situations is a complex process .Hence, Balancing the same without any changes is better than to take unnecessary risks.
On the other hand, Many people believe that we should solve problems by our selves as it can help us to achieve success. For instance, If a person is suffering from financial tensions then, Finding the way to solve the issue like joining new job with higher pay or attending additional part time job may help him to get out of stress rather than carrying the same the situation through out the years. In my opinion, I particularly believe that, Modifying the situation into a better stage is essential instead of adjusting to it.
To recapitulate, I strongly think that we should try to change the worst conditions into acceptable one. If one remains in same old scenario by tuning to it, progress is not possible However, It is important to evaluate the mistakes and remodel the scenario as it helps to solve the problem to a greater extent.
- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 11
- The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- Nowadays young people have to make the decision about their future career Some people however believe that teachers and parents can make a better choice for their future career Discuss both options and include your opinion with relevant examples from your 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76175378168 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1377919833 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160852647106 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595892053761 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476888324081 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906349304102 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384938591163 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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