In life, sometimes people experience difficult situations. While some people opine that the best way to deal with them are by accepting them, others think that struggling to make the situations better is the best choice. I agree with both views that accepting difficult situations and striving to improve the situation are both the best options to deal with unwanted circumstances.
On one side, there are several unwanted conditions that are hard to be changed. Because of that, the only thing that people can do is accepting the difficult situations. Although sounds uncomfortable, by accepting difficult circumstances people will learn to be thankful with what they have. As a result, these people will be happier and stress-free. For example, during recession time, where a lot of employees have been laid off, an employee is still hired but with low wage. In this situation, he has no choice but to accept his condition. During this difficult situation, he has learned to be thankful that he still gets a job even though the wage is not satisfying enough. As a result, he becomes content because he has learned to accept the unwanted situation.
On the other side, for unwanted situations that are still possible to be turned over, it is better for people to struggle to improve them. This is because, if we keep striving and searching for solutions, the situations will finally change into those that we wished for. Even though it may be hard at first, but it will not be useless at the end. For example, an employee feel dissatisfied with his current position as a salesperson, and he wants to be placed in operational division. He keeps struggling to improve his skill in order to be placed in operational division. Finally, he becomes skillful enough to be placed in operational division and can get out from the unwanted situation.
In conclusion, accepting unwanted situations is good for the situations that are hard to be changed, because it will teaches people to be thankful with what they have which will result in them being happier and more stress-free. Otherwise, struggling to improve unwanted situations is also good because for situations that are still possible to be changed, struggling will be able to change unwanted situations into situations that people wish for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e still gets a job even though the wage is not satisfying enough. As a result, he becomes content...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...are hard to be changed, because it will teaches people to be thankful with what they ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02356020942 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8093786646 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439790575916 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7497516346 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174799395256 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646574271417 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740539042263 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141773642251 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917474472893 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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