Accepting a bad situation in daily life such as an unwanted job, is considered to be an appropriate choice by some folks. However, others resist as they believe it is better to put an endeavor to improve such occasions. Here, I believe that may be it's good to accept bad situation as it helps an individual to become tolerable though, trying to overcome is more likely to lead a cheerful lifestyle.
Talking about why people should accept bad situation, by doing so this will make it easy to tolerate. As a result, likelihood of its perilous impact on social behavior and feelings, can be lesser. For example, most of the times a person in such tug of war may get depressed and it may make the lovable bonds with family and friends fragile. Once after accepting that, it would be easy to overcome and the one can learn to initiate a fresh start in life.
Although, it is ironically true that trying to overcome such life-turning scenarios would help to have a happy lifestyle. This is owing to the fact that the person who will try to do this, will have a sense of satisfaction which may lead to undepressed life. In addition to it, that person's behavior will help build more trustworthy bonds in the future. That means that the person would have healthy relationships with other people.
To recapitulate, it is sometimes appropriate accepting jumbling situation in life as it makes a person mentally stronger, though I believe it is rather better to face the situation and try to get out of this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n to initiate a fresh start in life. Although, it is ironically true that trying to o...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...depressed life. In addition to it, that persons behavior will help build more trustwort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, such as, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68679245283 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69516926078 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535849056604 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2984350749 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242505687777 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915432513905 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896039824023 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160919762458 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116844764308 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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