It is true that Anti Social activities are showing a consistent surge with each passing year. There are many reasons to be held responsible for these growing trends. And some possible solutions will also be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
There are various reasons which results in rising criminal activities. The very first reason is poverty which is one of the major issues in some parts of the world. As a result of this coma people find it difficult to make their both ends meet coma and hence they turn to crimes . Second most obvious reason is influenced from outside the world of entertainment and Technology. The content displayed in movies, songs or even online tends to be an influencer on people and if it shows violent or criminal material , it can encourage crimes in the real world.
crimes can, of course be dealt with by toughening criminal laws and by heightening the Social awareness. The most efficient way to plum these activities is to legislate new laws by government authorities which should be harsher . As a result, it will deter those subjects committing crimes. Moreover by running campaigns to spread awareness would lead to non violent society and non criminal too. There are also scientific proofs as well where making public aware by familiarising with consequences leads to manipulation of thoughts and public is more likely to avoid it.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for increasing Anti Social activities nowadays, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, in conclusion, of course, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05577689243 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73093581324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4901538516 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187702946101 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061170104686 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419899025385 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115500961384 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280349898894 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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