There has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as working a job which is either unsatisfactory or low salary, while another section of society today recognize that it is better to try and improve these situations. In my opinion, people ought to try and improve these situations because this attempt provide more happiness both their work and private lives.
Admittedly, most people in the world today accept that it is the duty of a government to make new regulations with regard to provide good job opportunities for citizens. However, this view might be perilous on citizens’ career because they must learn cope with bad situations such as shortage of money or unsatisfactory job. According to a report published by the New York Times, people who working an unsatisfactory job more ambitious than others. Therefore, it is better to try improve and deal with bad situations.
On the other hand, if low salaries are given to employees they might face lack of confidence and experience low motivation rather than improve these situations. For example, most people in the New Zeland today working in bad conditions such as overtime working or with neither health insurance nor high salary and this situation sometimes can cause both attention deficit and lack of creativity and productivity.
To sum up, skill of cope with bad situations are good talent for most people. Nevertheless, they should not think that it is best way to accept a bad situation, they should try and improve their life conditions.
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this?What possible solutions can you suggest? 67
- The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause the problem to their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, such as army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. What is your opinion? 78
- TOPIC: An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation? 61
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agreJioe or disagree with this opinion? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ty today recognize that it is better to try and improve these situations. In my opinion...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...uations. In my opinion, people ought to try and improve these situations because this a...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cope'
Suggestion: to cope
...ns' career because they must learn cope with bad situations such as shortage of...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing or with neither health insurance nor high salary and this situation sometimes...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...rtheless, they should not think that it is best way to accept a bad situation, they sho...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... to accept a bad situation, they should try and improve their life conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86426760719 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8852063262 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34895859701 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136429876434 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775910181571 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207615854644 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849552342345 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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