There has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who believe that grandparents have an essential role in raising children, while another section of society thinks that this situation has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will delve both sides of this view before drawing a reasonable conclusion. In my opinion, both grandfather and grandmother are important for raising a child due to their experiences and knowledgeable.
Admittedly, after decades of speculation, child psychologists were able to obtain fairly accurate information concerning positive effects of grandparents on bringing up a child. Perhaps the primary benefit of this is that grandparents have more experiences than parents concerning baby feeding and baby health conditions. According to a report published by the New York Times, pupils who were brought up by grandmother healtier than others thanks to accurate eat habits. Secondly, babysitters might be perilous not only for babies but also for parents owing to lack of real parent love. Real love which comes from grandparents supports creativity and productivity of children. Thus, grandparents should be involved in bringing up the children.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that grandparents should not interrupt between children and parents. The main reason why grandparents shoud not be involved process of child bringing is that their penalty methods might be dangerous for children’s pyschologies and even mental healths. A good illustration of this is that children who were given strong punishments cannot cope with complex issues due to lack of confidence. Therefore, parents ought to be prudent concerning their children’s psychological conditions. Hence, the decision as to whether grandparents should be involved process of child rising must be taken in the context of the entire family.
In conclusion, it must be said that grandparents and bringing up children have become a complex issue with no solutions. My personel view is that grandparents might be useful for childrin bringing up because they can easily cope with complex issues thanks to their experinces.
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...logical conditions. Hence, the decision as to whether grandparents should be involved process...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the context of the entire family. In conclusion, it must be said that gran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5421686747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1070134866 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8131868073 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275596269179 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994027034633 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634374834802 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177251927707 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408796879712 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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