It is very common that people come across disadvantageous situations and have hardships in life. Some choose to accept these difficulties while others try to come over the problem for better lives. In my opinion, I completely agree with the latter since it is a positive attitude and could create miracles.
The reasons that human beings tend to take whatever they gain from life, including the bitter parts, are understandable. The behind logic is that they are afraid things might get worse when trying to change current situations. For instance, one can become completely unemployed if he quits from an unsatisfactory job. To invest in a small business might lead to the entire loss of one's limited capital. An interesting but sad statistic published by Family and Child organization in China claims that over 50% of Chinese couples choose to stay in their loveless marriages for the reason of avoiding trouble. Moreover, these couples hold a common belief that the next relationship will not be better than their present ones. Not everyone is brave enough to step out for a change. Therefore, it is not blamable if someone refuses to make any alterations and amendments to his unpleasant circumstances. All are personal decisions, after all.
However, like the rest of folks, I agree that to upgrade oneself and change unfavourable status into positive ones are better and more acceptable ways to solve the problem. Changes bring opportunities, which will lead to success sooner or later. Take Jacky Ma, the founder of the Chinese top 1 electronic commercial platform, as an example. In his early 30s, he was just a clerk who was working 9 to 6 every day in a small company with a hamble wage. His initial motive to switch a job was simply to earn more money so that he could feed the family better. The ambitions grew along with each step of improving unsatisfactory situations. Finally, he built his empire in e-business. Numerous examples in real life proved that trials allow fifty percent of opportunities to succeed, while there is no chance at all without trial.
In conclusion, even though it is personal choices and should not be blamed no matter which life pattern people decide to follow, still, I am on the side that human beings should make all efforts to get rid of negative parts in life and pursue brighter future.
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- Nowadays people spend much more time and money on their appearance than before Do you agree or disagree 90
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- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most ag 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[8]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'of': 'afraid of things'.
Suggestion: afraid of things
...able. The behind logic is that they are afraid things might get worse when trying to change c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91919191919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373073777 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2569362097 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7619047619 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131100983919 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343161661286 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449746147903 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760700220491 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438038560235 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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