Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is obvious that people often face lots of difficulties during their lives, especially in work place or at school. While many people nowadays argue that it is necessary to accept a bad situation like an unsuitable job or a disappointing salary; however, I would believe that we should overcome these bottlenecks and enhance such situations to have a brighter life.
On the one hand, there are a clear ethical arguments against accept some difficulties happen in lives. Receiving decent salary without being interested in job is one of the best example of this point. It is clear that many undergraduate students are having an unsuitable jobs, which are not related to their majors, but they receive a stable salary monthly to pay for the cost of livings such as electric bill, accommodation or food. So, it makes them try to complete their tasks at work with great efforts. Moreover, receiving salary with the modest amount of money but gaining happiness and pleasant is far better than earning money from illegal activities, which must be punished appropriately.
On the other hand, some people assume that accepting a bad situation is a temporary solution, while trying and enhancing such bad situations is more necessary. The main reason is that taking the best attempts to overcome current disappointing conditions will be rewarded a better career. The most salient example of this is Nguyen Ngoc Ky, an all the rage Vietnamese teacher. Although the terrible disease left him physically handicapped, he never stopped trying to study to achieve his goals. Furthermore, giving an effort to improving difficulties, people could push back the boundaries of their knowledge. The more harder they try, the more successful they have. Personally, I absolutely agree that people should accept some bad situations; nonetheless, I feel that it is crucial to enhance such bad circumstance to develop themselves.
In conclusion, whereas people may vary in their opinions, I think that we should know how to accept disappointing conditions and improve them later to have a better lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: job
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Suggestion: harder
... the boundaries of their knowledge. The more harder they try, the more successful they have...
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...d circumstance to develop themselves. In conclusion, whereas people may vary i...
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...rove them later to have a better lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, whereas, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20414201183 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88599117548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.477967004 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285857513752 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811182309614 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689103992661 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157373574545 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644282378283 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.