Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Accepting bad situations is considered as the best way by some individuals. taking examples, when you are not satisfied with your job or in poor, it may be the most suitable approach to adopt the condition. sometimes people will be stressed or get panic, indignant or disappointed at the unsatisfying circumstance, which does harm to one's physical and mental health resulting from emotional frustration. Besides, our skills to adapting the changes also develop. At the same time, we may hold another attitude towards bad conditions in our life which improve our cognitive skills. Experiencing various life situations such as success and failure, happy or unhappy time, dramatic or quiet circumstances, is the necessary period of growing up and the treasure.
On the other hand, some find it better to struggle and change. Obviously, it needs efforts to reach that takes time and labour. but it can keep one energetic and positive in daily life, with power, enthusiasm and passion. After fulfilling it, you may feel a sense of achievement and exactly your life gets improved. Additionally, for moral values, it isn't absolutely nothing but meaningful. More importantly, our society, country and culture should be spirited although in faced with hardships or hampered by temporary problems.
As far as I am concerned, trying and improving bad situations is the more rational and effective approach when encountering unsatisfactory circumstances. Pain as we temporarily trapped in, we are still supposed to struggle and change, sometimes it is a boon for our growth to defeat it and be a hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, still, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26171875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05895043019 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6425648809 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121371278813 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404441369082 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497534728622 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748541023349 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261370098345 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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