Some people believe that It Is the best to accept a bad situation such as a unsatisfactory job or shortage of Money. Others argue that it Is Better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we are the most advanced society of all time, technologically and mentally speaking. We learned from past experiences to open our mind and to think bigger. To be able to deal with bad situations and to find a solution to those.
Even if we live in the best period ever, we could sometimes be faced with a bad situation, such as a boring job, a low wage or lack of money. Some people have settled for these instabilities, not trying to get better, therefore they are destined for living an unhappy life maybe full of remorses for not having tried to improve that specific error. If I was in one of these problems, I would have tried everything to get out of them using my brain, my knowledge and my abilities as much as I could.
Moreover, some people believe that it's better to try to find a solution to their issues. I totally agree with them, because I wouldn't be able to obtain a situation that doesn't make me feel good for all my life. I would find a better job that I liked as soon as possible and in case of lack of money or a low wage, I would ask my boss for a salary increase doing as much as I can to deserve it.
Fortunately, in my entire life, I've never dealt with an issue, as I'm still young, however I have a high respect for those who are never willing to be satisfied by something that they don't appreciate and therefore strive something better for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... and mentally speaking. We learned from past experiences to open our mind and to think bigger. T...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... some people believe that its better to try and find a solution to their issues. I tota...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...s. I totally agree with them, because I wouldnt be able to obtain a situation that does...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ldnt be able to obtain a situation that doesnt make me feel good for all my life. I wo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I would find a better job that I liked as soon as possible and in case of lack ...
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Suggestion: I've
...e it. Fortunately, in my entire life, Ive never dealt with an issue, as Im still ...
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Suggestion: I'm
...life, Ive never dealt with an issue, as Im still young, however I have a high resp...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to be satisfied by something that they dont appreciate and therefore strive somethi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32061068702 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5318810965 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8898954914 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155668001743 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625324201696 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566741196779 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840563216523 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622752961629 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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