some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
The satisfaction job is becoming trending topic todays, where the people who want to apply for job should be chose the best job for them smartly. Several people say that it will be better to face a bad situation in job, while the others argue that to improve or try some situations is good. In this essay will be discuss about the both of opinions.
Basically, the people struggle in study and learn specific lesson deeply in order to get a job is suitable with their background education. The major has a n important role here, where the people effort to know and improve their knowledge depend on their major subject. For instance, the student who learn about the machine should get a job including about it, because the skill of this student just around it even has a best ability with it. as a result, to work in machine industry will give them a comfortable then the satisfaction is reached by them. In conclusion, if in every workforce is matching with the everyone background skill, it gives a welfare in work in every industry neither in government employees.
Beside that, in the other situation, most of people have many ambitions and even never satisfied with which they get. In this case there are several events that must be faced by these people. The first, with the purpose which should be reached the people is already to start their struggle from the lowest point therefore make them get use to finishing a poor happen. Secondly, the capabilities that had by them is not enough in one side, the meaning is some skills should be knew such as in management, specific skill and others, it is due to the number of competition is increasing significantly nowadays. In addition, the commitment is obligatory to had for everyone who is struggling in their goals consequently, the job will be finish professionally with every experiences.
To sum up, I agree that it will be better to try any experience, even though it is unsuitable with our background education however it is important to addition our knowledge then form our professional character in workforce.
- some people believe that it is good to share at much information as possible in scietific research, bussiness and the academic world. others believe that some information is t important or to valuabe to be shared freely. 73
- The tendency of human to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extend do you agree? 73
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for example for sport or music, and others are not . However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.Discuss both these views 67
- Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eir background education. The major has a n important role here, where the people...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...of this student just around it even has a best ability with it. as a result, to w...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: the; everyone
... if in every workforce is matching with the everyone background skill, it gives a welfare in...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... Beside that, in the other situation, most of people have many ambitions and even never sati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81058495822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72398333234 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3506009502 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168176857927 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556698563063 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676491311179 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10073316984 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670561991024 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.