Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A better place and its surrounding environment and necessary facilities play a crucial for the development of a child. It is thought by some people that the children should be brought up in cities, however, *others* believe that rural environment is much suitable for the mental and physical growth of a child. In my opinion, I believe that the urban areas will provide modern facilities than the rural area, which is essential for the improvement of their learning abilities.
The metropolitan provides different modern facilities in our education system that help the children to learn any subjects or topics more conveniently. For instance, in cities, different electronic devices, like laptop, projector, computer etc are used to teach the children in schools. As a result they can learn anything easily than the children of rural areas. Although some modern facilities in schools are available in countrysides, these facilities are insufficient according to the number of the children. So, in compared to village areas, cities are the best option for the children.
On the other hand, while there is a lack of modern facilities available in villages, the environment of the village is suitable for the children living. For example, in my country, a statistic from the department of public health showed that the children of the cities are less healthier than the children who lives in countrysides. The main reason behind it that the pollution rate of cities are higher than the rural areas. But I think that this pollution rate in cities can be minimized by taking different social awareness programs.
To sum up, although rural areas providing better environment for living, due to lack of modern facilities I believe that the cities will be the best option for the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... used to teach the children in schools. As a result they can learn anything easily...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...wed that the children of the cities are less healthier than the children who lives in countrys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15807560137 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83208633853 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498281786942 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8081544863 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221428294029 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837988602566 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059611725401 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15742283348 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494980380093 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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