Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Unlike the past, when older people have much knowledge for all problems than young generations,at present, in modern lifestyle young people do well than old age.As a result, in some fields youngsters do better than old people and visa versa.In this topic proponents believe that adults should follow older's path ,but critics argue that it is better to adapt new idea to deal with problems.In this essay I will shed some light on both sides of this debate.
On one hand,it is believe that old generation have better knowledge and experience of any kind of problems.they have better knowledge of how to deal with problems.In modern days many people obey old people's advices.They also take rewards of "old is gold".Secondly,many medical science has also accept and follow traditional way of treating diseases.Some medical advises from our grandparents also useful to treat lots of problems.For instance,few days ago i had a toothache in middle night,and i did not have painkiller to treat that pain.that time my grandmother advise me to chew cloves.and after half hour i felt better without any prescriptions.furthermore we cannot ignore the reality that old people are better to solve many family problems in easy ways.they solve problems without any disputes. Hence,it is believe that adults have to follow old people's advises and example in their life.
On other hand,it is believe that, new generation have better knowledge about various technology.and they have experience of faster life.my opinion is taken into account because we live in faster life,where technology is developed day by day as well as science progress increasingly.However,in some cases we can not follow every rules of old people. In addition, Young generation perform well better than old people in field of technology.and they does not believe in old beliefs.Foe example,in the past when old people believe in astrology to take important decisions like marriage,but now modern generation only believe in only in love and mutual understanding,Thus,in some cases youngsters do well than old people.
In a nutshell,i believe that both the views have their own standards.old people are correct on their own way.and new generation also right in their personal opinion.In today's life both generation's experience and knowledge as well as guidance in every fields are necessary to cope with the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32353862595 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.171806672 49.4020404114 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.833333333 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8333333333 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.3333333333 7.06120827912 359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285739383416 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170058097779 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737754387698 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19137655354 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646048217905 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...style young people do well than old age.As a result, in some fields youngsters do ...
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...ir personal opinion.In todays life both generations experience and knowledge as well as gui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32353862595 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.171806672 49.4020404114 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.833333333 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8333333333 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.3333333333 7.06120827912 359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285739383416 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170058097779 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737754387698 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19137655354 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646048217905 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.