Some people believe that it is better to keep criminals in prison for longer, while others disagree and say that we must find a different solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, it has been noticed that crime rate has abruptly increased in every country . In general, some people believe that to stop crime it is vital to keep criminals in prison for longer time. On the same time, some think that this is not the only solution .there should be some other methods to deal them. This essay will elaborate both concepts with my opinion at the end.
On the one hand, some people think that offenders should get punishment for longer time . They believe that it is a good way of treating them. They give two reasons in favor of this argument. firstly, they think that this will be a good example for other people in the society. So that no one else will do the same crime. secondly, they think that when criminals do not get longer punishment they try to repeat the same crime and become more confident . Usually they get more experiences from other offenders. So it is very important that they should get long prisons . This will help remarkably reducing crime ratio in a society.
On the other hand, some people suggest that there should be some other ways to address this issue. They insist their views with some reasons too. Firstly, most of the criminals are usually first time criminals. So they should be given second chance. it is good to penalize them for shorter time and then should be released with some warnings. It is better to observe them for some time. Secondly, prisons could be a training institute for these new offenders. This will create more anger and rage in them. It would be nice if they have some rehabilitation in their short punishment time. This way these effected people can be a good asset of society.
In my opinion, both views have solid points. But I think it is more beneficial for society that prisoners should get shorter punishment. We can make them useful part of community by educating and improving their skills. This will give us a nice and productive society and will help in development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, i think, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66379310345 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33117840494 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2334326759 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1111111111 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8888888889 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203822171859 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646435041958 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062574242148 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144672387953 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388542469572 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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