In much of the recent decade, the world has witnessed an increase in the amount of information in varied fields such as science and business. Some contend that the information should be freely shared, while such an opinion is challenged by many and insist that there are some kinds of information which cannot be open to everyone. However, it seems to me that some vital concepts should not be publicized free of charge. In this essay, some of these arguments will be put forward.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why some pieces of information are too important to be shared with others. When it comes to business, some information related to new products, functions or designs is regarded as valuable assets. These knowledge and skills - when developed by a company - lead to a success as well as a huge profit. Given the information disclosed to the public, competitors could easily imitate features of the products. With regard to scientists and researchers, having devoted their entire life to study and investigate in their chosen field, they should be rewarded for their concerted efforts. A case in point is copyright, which is the legitimacy of the scientific research. Moreover, some technological breakthroughs, making nuclear bombs for instance, are too detrimental to be readily accessible to the public. Therefore, such practical information is of paramount importance such as to affect societies.
Furthermore, there is no doubt that there is still much knowledge could be freely shared to the world. Take some major breakthroughs in the treatment of cancer as an example, had scientists decided to keep it behind closed doors, a large number of people could have died much earlier than they were supposed to. It is therefore clear that providing unremitting access to a wealth of information, even it is related to nation security risks, can offer huge advantages, which in turn benefits the society as a whole.
In conclusion, on the basis of the points mentioned above, it would seem that distributing information with no cost can help in certain aspects, yet it can be to the detriment of societies. I would therefore argue that vital and dangerous ones should be differentiated.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Lan Chi Nguyễn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'These knowledges'?
Suggestion: This knowledge; These knowledges
...designs is regarded as valuable assets. These knowledge and skills - when developed by a compan...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...o study and investigate in their chosen field, they should be rewarded for their conc...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...decided to keep it behind closed doors, a large number of people could have died much earlier tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06849315068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93288527485 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9430217299 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.823529412 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270362532174 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836691821599 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634581667017 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147429767589 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691850737599 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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