Nowadays is crucial to informed specially when it comes to science and it's methods of investigation, or other fields of study and business. The importance of information and it's impact raised some questions about the amount that should be shared or even if should have some restrictions. it is a topic that reflection is mandatory from both point of views but in my opinion, knowledge must be made available to all population.
In one point of view, information should be restricted because in one hand of its economic value but also because of possible damage if manipulated erroneously. In the branches of academic investigation and science the result of time consuming and money investment leads to possible scientific discoveries. This transform the information acquired by these methods very valuable. Also some knowledge can be dangerous if fall into the hands of people with bad intentions, as for example, potential lethal chemical that can be used as a weapon of mass murder in wars. In spite of this, not all result in bad consequences, since most will bring positive changes in society.
In different areas, the access to new data can contribute to the development of that particular field. In the health department to space exploration sharing our knowledge can lead to rapid improvement of all the technologies avaliable to us today.
If one nation discover a new vaccine, if that knowledge is readily available to the whole world many deaths can be preventable, specially in poor countries that could not pay for that product. Or if a new kind of space rocket motor is manufactured and shared that new discovery with all space Explorer companies that could open doors sooner for space exploration.
Overall, there are some valuable points that should be considered when sharing some new informations but the main thing that we should keep in mind is what we can learn as a species and improve as a society. As a suggestion, I recommend to publish all discoveries, especially if they can contribute to improve the life quality of other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as for, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02623906706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95985142332 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6093458267 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221406349071 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712582985788 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589465208002 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116869736068 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681743373759 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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