Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health. Others , however, believe that governments should take care of people’s health, so they should implement some rules and laws for that.
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated modern era, one of the most important concerns of many governments around the world is decreasing health of their citizens. A country can never make progress in science, technology, economy, and so on without having healthy nations. In this respect, some efforts must be made to alleviate the situation. The controversial question which arises here is whether governments should shoulder the improving health of their citizens or it is up to individuals. As far as I am concerned, intervention states could ensure health of their people but the role of each individual cannot be disregarded.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that the more advanced and improved public transportation could lead to the lower air pollution. So, governments should allocate a substantial amount of budget to this section, which can certainly contribute to a better environmental condition, and consequently, healthier nations. An example can drive this notion home. Once, I read an article in one website about the newly-established regulation in one of the metropolitan cities in the USA a couple of month ago. It was mentioned in the article, the mayor of the that city decided to dedicate a large portion of budget to improving the public transportation hoping that the air quality and public health will enhance. After eight or night months, results were amazing. According to environmentalists’ and public health center reports, there were a dramatic decrease in the number of pollutants and respiratory diseases. So, not only did this rule provide that city with a suitable infrastructure, but it also led to a sharp improvement in the health of citizens.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that individuals must take some responsibility for their health. To be more specific, people could surprisingly improve their health just by stopping doing some activities. Nowadays, people have desk-bound lifestyle as a result of possibilities and facilities offered by the modern technology such as using cars for going everywhere instead of walking and sitting in front of computer for long time. Besides, there is serious issues associated with nutrition. Although governments have been making some great efforts in improving quality of nourishment, individuals make ultimate decision in choosing type of nutrition. For instance, instead of consuming good nutrition including vegetables, fresh foods, and so forth, there is growing tendency among people to eat fast food and other meals that contain saturated fat. The results are easily predictable. Health problems like heart failure and cancer are increasing at an alarming rate, and the situation is very likely to deteriorate in future. Indeed, if people took care more about themselves, there would be fewer health problems. To put it in a more vivid picture, one of my best friends had sedentary lifestyle, to say nothing of his bad eating habits. All of these together resulted in his liver cancer, and unfortunately, he died young, at the age of 28. Had my friend done a little exercise and prevented himself from eating fast food, which is definitely a personal choice, he would be alive enjoying himself.
In conclusion, having aforementioned reasons and examples into account, one can infer that to have healthy nations, a combination of governments and individuals’ effort is required. Government by enacting some proper rules and individuals by paying more attention to their health and avoiding doing some bad activities could improve public health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... each individual cannot be disregarded. The first vital point to bear in mind is...
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... An example can drive this notion home. Once, I read an article in one website about...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are serious issues'?
Suggestion: there are serious issues
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Suggestion: in the future
...situation is very likely to deteriorate in future. Indeed, if people took care more about...
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...activities could improve public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3007.0 1615.20841683 186% => OK
No of words: 567.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30335097002 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.121338375 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 323.0 176.041082164 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569664902998 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 938.7 506.74238477 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3450916961 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.37037037 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292125218778 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698692846316 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796996299204 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175347880612 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053632614246 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.