Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people ,while other are against it .Discuss both views and give your own opinion and relevant example.
Today ,media play a vital role in spreading information of the world among the common people .However, few individuals think that media is publishing private news which is harmful for the masses while others disagree by this. This essay , primarily, evaluates the significant role of media and secondarily, expresses the detrimental cause of spreading personal detail of individuals.
First and foremost, media become an important mean of spreading the news worldwide .However it is not only transmit the knowledge but also entertain their viewers by showing news related to life of eminent celebrities, sport persons ,political leaders ,etc. This telecast regarding any personality is beneficial for both the common people and that for famous personality .To exemplify, a recent research revealed that media make many ordinary people famous star in a night by publishing their talent in television.
In contrary,the media should not forget that celebrities and politicians are also living beings and they also have right for their privacy. These news channels ruin the life of these celebrities for the TRP or for making the channel famous among all other channels.To illustrate ,recent news shown by BCC news channel that Indian actress commit suicide because media show fake news about her which spoil her career .Thus, this is very shameful for these channels.
In conclusion ,It can be reiterated that media has lot of benefits. However, media has no right to interfere in the private life of person. In my opinion, government should make a strict rule for media, if they interfere in the life of any person personal life then they have to face
plenty or jail
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25278810409 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69118359385 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7004112728 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163941008679 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771081209765 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541458036432 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106150348128 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359957425439 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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