Some people believe that money spend on developing technology for space exploration is not justifible , they think there are other beneficial way to spend money .To what extent do you agree or disagree
In today's era , science and technology have helped improve all aspects of our life even in the field of space research. A group of individuals believe that waste of money on new innovation for space exploration . It is disagreed that because new space technology provide better communication as well as geographical information.
To commence with, numerous masses think that budget spend on developing technology for solar system exploring is not necessary for global perspective . However, globalnisation is increase all around the world , so necessary for huge money spend on new satellite , which is fillfull gap of communication ,as results countries are connected with each others for their work . for instance , two country , which is far away from each other , there businessman only way to connection is internet , which is provided by outdoor earth space satellite . Hence , it is clear money spend on space technology is necessary , which is helpful to many ways .
Secondly , before space research people cannot predicted to climate changes and geography views , but after the innovation on sapce explorations , which can provided all information about it . For example , weather forecast provided information about climate changes such as strom , tusumani ,lighting rain , temperature , etc . Moreover , space satellite on function G.P.S. give information about map , which can helpful all masses in today's era .Thus , it is clear evidence spending money on space research innovation is also beneficial .
To sum up , spend funds on solar system exploration is beneficial as better long distance communication as well as geographical knowledge. I supported this point of view because nowadays all of as need to better internet connectivity and climent changes information . In near future sauce exploration will be increase , which helpful for globe .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59074733096 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07419583997 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4171999839 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294031923567 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11478453276 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076790523302 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172586940433 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688318798707 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.