With the advance of technology, people have had different access to up-to-date information. Some argue that the best way to gain information is by newspapers. While this opinion is still supported by some people, others have found other media more useful to obtain information. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and explain why other media are far better than newspapers.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that newspapers have long been praised for their reliability. The information on this popular news channel is likely to be verified carefully before being published. People involved in the checking process will follow various steps to investigate the authenticity regarding the sources of news, the writing style of articles, relevant images and so on. Thus, it may take more time and effort to get the news published. In contrast, digital media do not necessarily authenticate the news before putting it online, and this not only creates a lot of fake news but also misleads readers.
On the other hand, the internet is more efficient than newspapers to transmit messages. Compared with the latter, the former is more time-efficient, updating online readers with the latest news anytime and anywhere if some catastrophes occur. For example, the news about an earthquake that struck a country can be spread quickly on the Internet, and the people in another country can get to know it within seconds.
Considering both views, it is reasonable to state that every medium has its own advantages and disadvantages. Thus, news learners should smartly utilize all media at their disposal by making the best of the strong points and overcoming the drawbacks of each channel. By using media effectively, people can obviously become more knowledgeable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...r media are far better than newspapers. On the one hand, there is no doubt that ...
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...ntry can get to know it within seconds. Considering both views, it is reasonable...
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Suggestion: making the best
... utilize all media at their disposal by making best use of the strong points and overcoming...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, second, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, in contrast, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14878892734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81755678093 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4940976717 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271993074084 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831082714286 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570107732279 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151334167994 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621819920686 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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