The issue of whether or not people should interact with others through technology has been a heatedly discussed topic in the recent years, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Some people reckon that technology has a positive impact on our human relationships while others do not agree. Personally speaking, I would assert that this phenomenon is a positive development which leads to an expansion of our social circles and improvement of long-distance communication.
Many people believe that the Internet has had negative effects on our relationship with others. Some unnecessary misunderstandings are the result of using stickers and emoticons inappropriately while chatting online. For example, once I was talking to my mother, and she sent me a smiley face to show her happiness. But, it looked like a fake smile rather than a real one. I wondered if I had done something wrong to irritate my mother so much that she used this sarcastic smile on purpose. This phenomenon is easily misunderstood and embarrassing. Given that electronic icons pervading online cannot accurately express human feelings, some might insist that people should avoid relying too heavily upon this state-of-the-art technology.
To be honest, technology allows us to chat with friends from a distance. As many people are living in the fast-paced urban life nowadays, people are so busy that they do not have time to have parties and meetings with their friends. However, the advent of social media allows us to send messages and video calls to friends in our spare time. In addition, many people don’t have sufficient time to go to parties to meet new people, but social media provides a platform for people to make friends. People can easily find people with the same interests from all over the world. Technology not only provides us with the opportunity to make friends but also improves our social skills.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that technology can help us make more friends, and we can use social media to contact our friends at any time, as its positive effects outweigh the rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not people should interact with others thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02528089888 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82593065067 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587078651685 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0437870553 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.235294118 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308158230966 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971991713873 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829364731318 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174149751303 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864039146414 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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