Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison but some of them should allow to do unpaid work for community. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that some offenders should be locked in cell. However, some of them are allowed to do social work free of cost. I, strongly agree with the given phenomenon because it helps in reducing the crime rate.
First and foremost, in this modern era, criminal activities are increasing day by day specially petty crime such as chain snatching, small robbery and many more. Undoubtedly, if the offender's of small crime are given punishment of community work, not only it helps them to know about the importance of hardwork but also they realise the real value of money. Surprisingly, with this kind of punishment culprits, switch their mind from criminal activity towards hardwork. Thence, offends might be change into a responsible citizens of a nation.
What is more, the punishment of social work can help government for the development of a country because by giving social work to the criminals, save the money of a nation and governing authorities can shift this money in making new factories and companies for the unemployer and it is interesting to note that this thing is proven by Finland which is clearly highlighted in cosmopolitan magazines in their recent survey. Hence, it is not difficult to understand that why community punishment is so lucrative.
In conclusion, after having all points into my knowledge, I, would like to reiterate that it will be a great initiative by the government to give a chance to offenders to be free from the clutches of crime as it assist them to live a life full of respect and dignity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90458015267 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7847559469 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.574677732 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18301954195 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793174021496 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919608643245 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122226139096 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110388057288 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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