Some people opine that these days people have excessive options. I completely agree with the statement and will explain the reasons.
Firstly, the rapid development of technology has caused a lot of new inventions to emerge. Many new inventions have been developed to help people running their daily activities. As a result, people often become effortless and lazier to get something that they want. For instance, currently there are a lot of online food delivery services that can be accessed easily by people. Each of them has their own restaurants choices which can be suited with people's financial ability and menu preferences. Consequently, people become lazier to cook by themselves because they can get their favorite food menu instantly and in affordable price.
Secondly, the increase of competition between corporations have made those firms to follow the trend. Because all firms want to be profitable, they decided to produce something that is being searched by many people. As a result, a lot of products from the same product category, with their own qualities and price started to emerge. This has made people to become more consumptive because they have wide choices to shop. For example, oversized t-shirt is currently trending in fashion world. Many clothing brands then started to produce oversized t-shirt with their own qualities and prices. Consequently, people become more consumptive because they have wider choice in shopping. Even though they don't have a lot of money, they can still purchase oversized t-shirt with the price that they can afford.
In conclusion, I completely agree that these days people have excessive options because the rapid development of technology has caused a lot of new inventions to emerge and the increase of competition between corporations have caused firms to produce trending products, which lead to the emergence of many products in the same category.
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...er choice in shopping. Even though they dont have a lot of money, they can still pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29836065574 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72723826255 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472131147541 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5618953456 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132382643878 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507532762155 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335056587795 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948478589874 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182781713022 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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