In life, sometimes people experience unwanted circumstances. While some people opine that the best way to deal with them is by accepting, others argue that striving to make the situations better is the better choice. I completely agree with both views, where accepting and struggling are both good choices to face difficult situations.
On the one side, some hard situations are often unavoidable and hard to be changed. Even though they have tried, the situations are impossible to be changed. Hence, the best way to deal with them is by accepting them. For the example, a guys named Dion is laid off by his company as a result of a recession that happened in the country. There is no way for Dion to look for a solution about why he has been fired, because it is not due to his bad performance, but due to his company's shortage of money. Therefore, the best way for Dion to face this bad situation is by accepting it.
On the other side, some difficult situations are still possible to be improved and to be changed. There are still possibilities for people to get out from those situations. Therefore, the best way to face them are by struggling, until the situations get better. For instance, Harold is dissatisfied with his current job as a salesperson, and he seeks a position to be in operational division. To be in that division, he requires special skills which he actually does not have. Facing the situation, he keeps striving to learn the needed skills to be able to move into his dream position. Finally, Harold succeeded and be able to get out from the unwanted situation.
In conclusion, accepting bad situations is suitable for facing unavoidable and impossible-to-change situations, while struggling to change difficult situations is good for dealing with situations that are still possible to be improved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a guy' or simply 'guys'?
Suggestion: a guy; guys
... is by accepting them. For the example, a guys named Dion is laid off by his company a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89389067524 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97064347505 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479099678457 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9744342209 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215606249471 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758933779545 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680239917086 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152226236284 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468976981761 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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