Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is generally believed that modern people are provided with a wide variety of options. From my perspective, I firmly agree with this idea
First, living in an advanced society offers countless career paths, some are only existed in the last century or even over the past 20 years. The technological break thoughts have provided unprecedented job opportunities in the fields of artificial intelligence, computerised art, e-commerce, virtual assistants, etc. Moreover, employees in the digital age can perform their tasks regardless of their locations owing to the advance of personal computers and the Internet. For example, in the past, journalists are limited to written scripts in set-up backgrounds, while nowadays, these reporters can be engaged in numerous social media platforms and broadcast the news from their own living rooms.
Second, modern citizens are granted the freedom to explore any lifestyles they desire without the judgement of society. Historically, divorcing or homosexuality are both considered inappropriate and unacceptable and thus must be eliminated. However, with the positive changes in the social perception, termination of an unhappy marriage, being a single mom or single dad and marriage freedom regardless of gender have all become normal choices. In addition, a lot of professions that is widely recognized now used to not getting enough respect from the former societies. Careers involving show business such as singers, models, dancers and especially street dances and pole dancers used to be discriminated against and despited, but are becoming role models of success and admiration these days.
In conclusion, I believe that citizens of the 20th century have several options in many aspects of life thanks to technological advances and an open-minded society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58545454545 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04288684157 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0112682791 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105747999138 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371090252527 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048050597075 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851226848079 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071037254215 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.