It is argued that people have enormous number of options in present-days. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will discuss more reasons according to this subject.
Initially, industries are developing rapidly to provide the human basic requirements, which are expanding day by day. Therefore, according to the economic law, there is a huge surge in a rivalry between the industries in the same field. Moreover, either amount or type of goods are increasing significantly. For instance, in my country, the number of manufactures producing the milk products is around two hundred and their products have been advanced by enriching the ingredients such as a milk rich with calcium, nutrition, fruit flavour and fiber. It is obvious that customers spend plenty of time to choose the appropriate selection.
Secondly, options are becoming wider because of information technology which is also improving dramatically since late 1990's. In consequence, people are now available to purchase the wares not produced in their home countries by using internet. Thus, people are enlarging their capabilities to make more sophisticated objects.
In conclusion, as the two analyzed reasons above, I strongly agree with the idea that the choices people have are enlarging today. Development causes expanding the choices people have, to lead lives that they value, and improving the human condition so that people have the chance to lead full lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4140969163 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91009094626 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7317055104 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.416666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144633459032 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470615787595 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533711150096 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096062242692 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725444261738 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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