It is argued that people have enormous number of options in present-days. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will discuss about more reasons why we have an endless selection which are not only our basic needs, but also luxurious stuffs.
Initially, industries are developing rapidly to provide the human basic requirements, which are expanding day by day. Therefore, according to the economic law, there is a huge surge in a rivalry between the industries in the same field. Moreover, either amount or type of goods are increasing significantly. For instance, in my country, the number of manufactures producing the milk products is around two hundred and their products have been advanced by enriching the ingredients such as a milk rich with calcium, nutrition, fruit flavour and fiber. It is obvious that customers spend plenty of time to choose the appropriate selection.
Secondly, options are becoming wider because of information technology which is also improving dramatically since late 1990's. In consequence, people are now available to purchase the wares not produced in their home countries by using internet. For example, world top online shops, such as Amazon, Ebay, Walmart, give the opportunities people to buy everything they need from wherever they are. Thus, people are enlarging their capabilities to make more sophisticated objects.
In conclusion, as the two analyzed reasons above, I strongly agree with the idea that the choices people have are enlarging today. Development causes expanding the choices people have, to lead lives that they value, and improving the human condition so that people have the chance to lead full lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32830188679 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84137161709 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.664990108 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146903706859 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449415269273 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505584298721 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953978833483 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682987606671 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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