Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this state .Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Within the contemporary era, some people believe they are afforded a myriad of choices. This circumstance is made based on internet connection and amelioration of technology day by day. I personally do opine despite existing limitations, all the constituents living within today's world are provided many options and facilities based on which standards could get accelerated in all walks of life. I do wholeheartedly agree with this contemplation and this essay will elaborate on the details why I am thinking so.
To begin with, improvements in products and facilities seem to be an inevitable notion which human's lives get tied with. Although purchasing all new products and having accessibility to all facilities seem to be impossible, the number of these new commodities gets all citizens surrounded by eye-catchingly. Therefore, if an analogy is made, everyone will say the manufactured products existing around are significantly rised concerning their number and quality. To illustrate , a tangible example is communication that now the means of it extraordinary ameliorated as people find variety of options available to keep in touch with their beloved ones like voice calls, video calls, texting and etc. meanwhile these opportunities had not exist before. To sum up by launching a myriad of options day by day people acquire vast approaches to pick desirable ones to meet their needs.
Moreover, as means of transportation started to improve and more facilitated vehicles were invented people found themselves capable of approaching farer distinctions where hardly ever did previous generations thought about as options. Under today's circumstances some people decide just to go to a far-fetched island within an isolated zone rather than travel to a city nearby. If previous smart people didn't scrutinize ways to get human's lives standards improved, expanding far horizons would still remain unapproachable. To sum up, by emerging better selections people find themselves able to reach numerous destinations ignoring whether it is near or far.
All in all, a wide range of options are provided within today's life situation in which individuals can pick different decisions to head to the far horizons; a fact that was presumed to be impossible for former citizens who used to live in the same area. From my perspective this phenomenon is as transparent as everyone could find it out. Provided essay illustrated some reasons along with a few examples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14761848476 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622739018088 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.331687444 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.294117647 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121178429987 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404297987368 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341807543549 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754612606671 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316656274136 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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