The great number of people believe in an idea, that modern market offers to an individual a huge choice of products and services. Personally, I totally agree with this statement and in this essay will explain why.
The main reason why I support aforementioned notion is humanity live in the era of modernization and globalization where every person has difficulties with choice. As these processes improve world's economy there are significant quantity of companies, fabrics and creators who seeks purchasers for their products. As well as this people are living in peacefull period without wars and epidemics, which would forced them close their borders. Consequently, in particular country we can find items throughout the world. Moreover, psychologyst from big business created an idea of consumerism, which dictate people to buy, consume and use products and services that could be unnecessery for them. In addition, any innovations in some area promote by creating advertisement and existing such as big number of adds on TV, social media, magazines can be an evident of the big choices.
Governments, also has their impact on developments which lead to expand choice in shops and markets. In addition they set rules supporting business which create this choice. Furthermore, nowadays people tend to be a cosmopolitan and share everything with neighbour countries. Thus, create a competition in the inner market which also can lead to choice problem.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that currently in people's life there are too many choices, created by time with countries government for enlarging economy. I absolutely agree with this notion because there are several strong evidents such as a huge markets, shops with products and numerous of advertisements.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'market'?
Suggestion: market
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36559139785 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96875469707 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4070276056 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215094067724 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696155060248 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550632217526 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141973030938 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574730043454 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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