It is socially agreed that in this day and age people have a wide range of things to choose from and make their own decisions. This essay agrees that we have the will power to know and choose what we want.
Modernisation has brought remarkable positive changes in our lives. People are now well vexed on all things on earth, provided that one is not ignorant. We can now make informed decisions. For instance, in most African countries it was a taboo to discuss issues of sexual abuse, therefore perpetrators used to take advantage of that to exploit victims. But now its being discussed everywhere and support centres like victim friendly units and adult rape clinics were setup to support the survivors. It is now one's choice either to report the offender and seek help or suffer in silence as it is not encouraged to do so.
Furthermore, technology brought a light to the human race. Internet is now readily available to all countries, including underdeveloped nations. It is now more like a basic need. For example, longback people were not knowledgeable about some health practises, such as dangers of smoking or predisposing factors for conditions like diabetes mellitus and preventive measures, as well as treatment modalities. But now know how is all over on the internet, you can now google and its upto you to choose what best for a positive change to stay health.
In addition, ancient days there were no schools to attend and learn. Nowadays humans are able to read and write. In the past people were cohesed to sign things that they could not read or understand, therefore it lead to high rate in cases of fraud. It is now that people read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they do not loose their properties or items of great value.
However, there are some people who come from backgrounds that do not permit them to be exposed to things like internet, owning a cellphone or even watching television. These people do not have choices to make well informed decisions because they are stuck in the past which is a sad reality.
In conclusion, the benefits of modernisation and development of information technology outweighs drawbacks of some backgrounds and cultural practises of certain nationalities. Apart from these problems, it is of note that the majority of people are now knowledgeable and they can make sound decision.
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- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of wether the course 61
- The bar chart below shows figures of annual coffee and meat consumption. 56
- The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ged to do so. Furthermore, technology brought a light to the human race. Inter...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...ld not read or understand, therefore it lead to high rate in cases of fraud. It is n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w that people read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they do not loose their pr...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89356435644 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75984993071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3290307662 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179247242525 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502363467702 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569948012521 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100526930141 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665907721577 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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