Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Different countries believe that the fruitfulness relies on its financial stability, while other people argue, there are some form of progression crucial like the economy as well. This essay will discuss other sector which are equally crucial and the role it play.
The economy is the backbone of any nation. It is of paramount importance to take into account the need for a progressive economy. Financial stability of a country brings sanity. Poor economy can lead to outbreak of communicable diseases or increased crime rate. For instance, in developed countries, there is low recorded number of offenders related to robbery and the diseases of impoverished such as cholera or trachoma.
Furthermore, a strong economy lead to a health nation, psychologically. A crippling economy is a distress to the citizens, as well as the governments. Therefore, growth in the economy brings relief and mental stability and it also increase life expectancy. For example, people from a nation with struggling economy are at high risk of developing heart attacks or psychiatric conditions due to stressors of the economy.
However, the peace of a nation plays a huge role apart from the economic growth. There are some countries which are well-developed, though they experience civil unrest. It is crucial for the government to focus on increasing growth in security system. For example, recently in America they are people, who were shot dead in the city of New Jersey.
In conclusion, the benefits of economic growth outweighs the drawbacks of types of progresses. Economic growth is advantageous, as there will be reduced number of communicable diseases, high employment rate, only to mention a few.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02450893882 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5330995791 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154564141865 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441645536273 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504451601827 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799997380432 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385804003137 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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