It is socially agreed that in this day and age people have a wide range of things to choose from and make their own decisions. This essay agrees that we have the will power to know and choose what we want.
Modernisation has brought remarkable positive changes in our lives. People are now well vexed on all things on earth, provided that one is not ignorant. We can now make informed decisions. For instance, in most African countries it was a taboo to discuss issues of sexual abuse, therefore perpetrators used to take advantage of that to exploit victims. But now its being discussed everywhere and support centres like victim friendly units and adult rape clinics were setup to support the survivors. It is now one's choice either to report the offender and seek help or suffer in silence as it is not encouraged to do so.
Furthermore, technology brought a light to the human race. Internet is now readily available to all countries, including underdeveloped nations. It is now more like a basic need. For example, longback people were not knowledgeable about some health practises, such as dangers of smoking or predisposing factors for conditions like diabetes mellitus and preventive measures, as well as treatment modalities. But now know how is all over on the internet, you can now google and its upto you to choose what best for a positive change to stay health.
In addition, ancient days there were no schools to attend and learn. Nowadays humans are able to read and write. In the past people were cohesed to sign things that they could not read or understand, therefore it lead to high rate in cases of fraud. It is now that people read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they do not loose their properties or items of great value.
However, there are some people who come from backgrounds that do not permit them to be exposed to things like internet, owning a cellphone or even watching television. These people do not have choices to make well informed decisions because they are stuck in the past which is a sad reality.
In conclusion, people are now knowledgeable and can make sound and informed decision, this was brought about by modernisation and development of information technology. Only few people are affected by backgrounds and cultural practises.
- The graph below shows how prices of 'high-tech gadgets' changed over time in Somecountry. 61
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 84
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Other believe that the family still remains more important 84
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.Summa 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ged to do so. Furthermore, technology brought a light to the human race. Inter...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...ld not read or understand, therefore it lead to high rate in cases of fraud. It is n...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w that people read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e read first and understand, what they are agreeing into so that they do not loose their pr...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y are agreeing into so that they do not loose their properties or items of great valu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8807106599 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72588950647 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540609137056 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7023236507 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184277556766 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520603506926 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567096143537 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104680191661 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637716711225 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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