Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Too many choices leads us usually to a confused state as to which is preferable and the right decision to move forward.Though at present we are provided with too many choices for every decision we either end-up in a stuck situation or the choice we take either be a bad one.
On one hand,People think that as we have many choices try out everyone possible and we might get one good result at least from either of the choices provided.Like for example a student after his schooling he either takes maths or science for his future academics if fails either of it then he chooses arts.In the similar way a kid is taken to a candy store he has to choose one candy but he couldn't make a good choice rather he preferred all the candies to have for him.There are both advantages and disadvantages the main advantage is you to get to learn from all the choice you choose which can make you better person but the disadvantage is you end entire life just by trialing all the choices for every situation rather than sticking on one and following it.
On the other hand,some designers feel that people really don't prefer much choices they just accept anything just because they trust the brand for years though the product does not have much of choices.Like for example,Laptops have not much difference like either it is normal one or the touch introduced to it.Though their internal features change every year but only choice people are given is just two.So this makes both of them easier and not having too many choices and confusing with which one to buy.Thus, we cannot in some cases factories force us to change our tastes by producing similar products.
To sum up,if we try to find various choices around us, it can be confusing to select one of them. However, by thinking deeper on this issue will depict us that there are not various choices in everything. people should know their real needs and search for the aspect which are vital for finding the best one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, thus, as to, at least, for example, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63428571429 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.445460601 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.128689927 49.4020404114 537% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.333333333 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.3333333333 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.1666666667 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156591118069 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781776034321 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506980203944 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105994842547 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406487821334 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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