Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that nowadays there are too many choices that people are facing. I agree with this opinion.
The main reason why people are confronted with surfeit choices is that they are suffering from a lot of problems because of this. First, too many choices has decreased life efficiency. This is because people need to spend too much time finding out the one we really need. For example, compared with people in the old days when they bought a thing in a small grocery, modern people are forced to purchase it in a big shopping mall with large numbers of goods in it, which normally takes them several hours to find one item that they really want.
Another trouble is that superfluous choices make it difficult for people to cultivate concentration, which means that they can be distracted by other things easily. For example, when reading or writing in spare time, people can be easily interrupted by entertaining activities showed online or on TV.
Admittedly, some people think that people are not facing excessive many opportunities since the choices given to them are still not enough. For example, workers need more chances in employment in order to find better jobs and earn more money, while students need more educational resources such as teachers or facilities so that they can be more likely to be well trained.
To summarize, there is no doubt that some people want more choices to live a better life, but I still think that people are confronting too many choices to finish things quickly and to concentrate on what they are doing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48654164771 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0299247066 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215612887779 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111033792325 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729821655502 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153273359303 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106015967416 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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