Thanks to globalization, consumers of nowadays world can have more alternatives to choose from. However, all products are not equally diverse and have many choices because of many reasons. These include government policy, geographic and trend.
Firstly, in some nation, depending on the policy of current government, consumers’ choices could be limit. It could be for the purpose of encouraging the development of specific industry inside the country, the government may not allow external business penetrating in their country. Besides, one country could ban products from another country due to the bad politic relationship, for example the trade war between the US and China.
Secondly, due to some geographic factors such as weather, location, etc, consumers’ choices on products could be greatly limit. In some nation with greatly low temperatures during the winter period such as Greenland, Switzerland, etc, hardly they could find any fresh fruits. Furthermore, in some regions where is so high above the sea level, in addition of low technology of transportation, people hardly could deliver products and almost never any business would invest into those regions.
Finally, it is also very difficult for you to have many alternatives on products if you are againsting the surround trend. For example, it is really costly and rare to find a Japanese scooter in Western countries as most people drive car or ride high engine motorcycle. Or you would never find a Gucci brand in poor economic country.
In conclusion, people, indeed, have more choices to choose on the very basic products due to the high integrated economy and globalization. However, not all products have the same diversity that consumers could consider before making decision due to the government policy, geographic and the current trend of surrounding
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tives on products if you are againsting the surround trend. For example, it is really costly...
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Suggestion:
... Gucci brand in poor economic country. In conclusion, people, indeed, have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43402777778 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93757182405 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2525214553 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134045702943 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508681347283 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471668319924 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811863830378 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495603951019 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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