Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain, while others say that films also have educational value. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are two different views about the meaning of movies.Some people think entertainment is the only effect for films,but others think movies also have some other influences,such as education and development of cultures and economics.I personally think films have abundant functions.
The former considers the purpose of movies is making some pleasures for people.For instance,one movie called “Fast and Furious” showed some plots,luxury cars were racing at urban areas,and driving technology of actors were really amazing.Many movies produced in India have some singing and dancing parts,it could make people feel relaxing and comfortable.In addition ,many fantastic movies produced by Disney company can make people fun when they are watching them at cinema.
The later thinks movies have enormous effects including education,and improving the economy.For example,one Indian movie called “Dangal” made population know keep exercise and be modest are important for competitions,never ever give up and pursue targets.A good movie also can bring many profits for the relevant companies and actors,hence promoting the development of movies.Some films shot at many beautiful sites,audiences could be attracted and make a plan to travel there after they watched these movies,hence it could have some impacts for tourist industries.In addition,there are plenty of films show cultures of nations,it could help people learn more about customs and religion.
My personal idea is that movies are not only for fun but also have other influences after watching hugely different types of films.People can get many informations that they don’t know after they watching movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91497975709 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19340051997 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.521165472 49.4020404114 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.25 106.682146367 342% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.75 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 7.06120827912 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184839734946 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133572072814 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743697625309 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133572072814 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743697625309 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 13.0946893788 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.97 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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