It is commonly maintained that parental influence is of high necessity on the kids’ growth, however, impact from outside environment of the children is much more essential. To my way of thinking, outside influence surpasses parental influence in terms of various social and educational skills which cannot be achieved by only being in contact with family members, however, the importance of the parents cannot be overlooked.
To commence with, it is undeniable that the family has a paramount impact on a child’s future as the babies learn their very first skills and way of thinking with imitating the actions of adults. Therefore, parents are responsible for teaching codes of conduct and behaviour to the children. Moreover, in today’s world, high-quality education requires a considerable amount of financial resources. Therefore, parents’ have a significant impact on the children’s education which is quite essential in the future career progression.
On the other hand, there are particular abilities and knowledge which children cannot learn by only being in contact with the parents. As an illustration of this, they can learn and develop specific behaviour, problem-solving techniques, value of sharing, collaboration as well as ability to act in front of a large crowd with participating in the social activities. Furthermore, school and university life can affect an individual in terms of outlook, social and educational skills, as students spend almost one-third of their daytime in the educational centres. In addition, as a majority of modern families are dual income in order to enhance the family’s financial status, they may have less time for children’s development.
To conclude, in spite of the fact that parents have indubitable role in every kid’s life, social influence can overshadow the impact of the family in terms of various essential abilities for being an independent member of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce of the parents cannot be overlooked. To commence with, it is undeniable that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, well, in addition, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48829431438 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10480676659 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.873062008 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.181818182 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183214606296 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726224476393 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080362762439 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122115725521 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876436650684 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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