some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual and team is the reason of most sports achievement other however think that mental attitude is a more important is both views and give your own opinion.
It is ubiquitously norm that victory in the sports are result of hard work talent and strong commitment.This notion has undergone sea change ever since modernization comes in lime light. A section of society adhare that body fitness a key role to win a championship for individual and player. by contrast other claim that mentally strong player can achieve their target. This shall elucidate the both views along with my slant in enjoying segments.
First and foremost reason why body is sound body is the necessity of all player that Owing to this sports person can perform extraordinary.To more percise If every team member put their 100% effort than the team can it definitely win as every single person play essential role in team sports. In 2016 World Cup cricket for instance could not win Indian team as the player Mahendra Singh Dhoni get injury during match. Consequently physical fitness contributing to get success in sports. Not only this but also this is a necessity for every sports as before selection of player to participation in game the physical fitness test is mandatory term of olympiad. By this I mean individual can't play game in an healthy condition. To make it one more clear with example Yuzaj Singh who is the well-known cricketer in India cricket team had not participate 4 year in team as he had serious fracture in his leg. Thus physically well is a primary term to win sports medal.
However, mentally strong bondmake the sports person to get a trophy in games.To illustrate some time team lost their championship as they did not get strength to get success the positive attitude need to overcome overwhlemely failure. To cite an example South Africa players are perfect in physically in all over the world yet they neither win championship nor World Cup the reason behind this the negative attitude towards expectation.What is more to maintain the mental conditions is a player determinant role to play game and face competition positivity and strong mental ability is make players from and boost the confidence which is is help them to improve their performance.
To recapitulate, after elucidator the both sides I vehemently vouch that although sound body is a primary term to participate in games get mentally strong player as well. lastly accord to my slant both aspects are essential for team to get achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, for instance, i mean, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95696202532 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80400290701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529113924051 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.517423993 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.533333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215416169082 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745198313376 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300782128718 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132692850391 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223948812053 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.