Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual or team is the reason for most sport achievements. Others think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both the view points and give your own opinion.
Sports play phenomenal role to uplift the standard of health and wealth. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that physical fitness is imperative for an individual or team to get sport achievements. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to discuss both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, a man or group of people who are the owner of physical fitness can accomplish name and fame for their country.Taking a real life example into consideration, virat kohli the captain of Indian cricket team is a very fit person and always give his best in matches and he make his team number one cricket team in the world. Therefore, physical fitness is worthwhile for an individual or whole team to glorify their country name all over the world. What is more, there are plethora of sports players such as Sania Sirza, PV sidhu, Vijendar Kumar, and many more who get medals in Commonwealth games due to physical fitness. Thus, physical fitness is essential to get achievements in sports field.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, positive attitude, focus on particular thing with sharp mind help masses to touch the zenith of success. To be specific, Sachin Tendulkar who is also known as master mind always played in positive mental attitude and use innovative ideas and strategies and made numerous world records.As a result, presence of mind in sports field is the need of an hour.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, both the points have their own significant. However, I still believe that physical fitness is more significant in sports field to outshine the name of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74961929708 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2444346603 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348450219599 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109543451376 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631539629403 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202594222103 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849678076205 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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