some people believe that playing a musical instrument can be beneficial in many different ways.others think it is a waste of time to play musical instruments.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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...ic is an art form and cultural activity.The playing musical instruments; how benefi...
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...aying musical instrument can be benefit.In this essay,I will explain the playing a...
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...rument can be beneficial but why? Music play a most important role in our life . Mor...
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...e,some people do not shows their talent.However,the express the feelings through music....
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...,the express the feelings through music.Afterthat,one more benefit music was professional...
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...ess the feelings through music.Afterthat,one more benefit music was professional. Ho...
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... benefit music was professional. However,the person participate in many competition....
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...onal. However,the person participate in many competition. On the other hand,there is an opposing...
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...tage of time to play musical instrument.According to parents,if students play musical ins...
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... musical instrument.According to parents,if students play musical instrument was ef...
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...usical instrument was effect on studies.As well as,over burden in studies.Futhermo...
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...trument was effect on studies.As well as,over burden in studies.Futhermore,over burde...
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...s mostly effected the carrer. In summary,the musical instrument playing was dependi...
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...n summary,the musical instrument playing was depending upon student to student or...
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...st then playing any musical instrument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, in summary, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01449275362 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.04293479363 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 122.743434111 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402000603784 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19073730576 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118424579354 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280483780735 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104444686767 0.056905535591 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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