Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?

Our society is categorized into those that take heed and care for the environment and others who are not in the least bothered about its sustainability, thus their efforts are negligible.

There is a grave threat looming over the environment whereby the masses are depleting it's resources extensively. Although, environmentalists, educationalists and the media are iterating the perils that our actions may cause there are very few who are attentive and strive towards preserving the environment. This is primarily because most are unable to forsee the future, since the current deterioration has not reached a critical level. Lack of information and education in underdeveloped and developing countries can also be another reason for this irresponsibility. Furthermore, many individuals have a misconception that changes are a result of large scale efforts and minor contributions go in vain.

However, every small step taken to preserve the environment can yield big results. Segregating of wastes at domestic level can lead to their treatment in an apt way, thus reducing different kinds of pollution. Ensuring that water and electricity are used wisely reduces the risk of shortage of these resources. The government and media should take an initiative to educate the masses about the dangers of over utilizing limited resources and heavy fines should be levied on individuals who misuse resources. Environmental education should be made a compulsory part of primary school curriculum to inculcate a sense of responsibility towards the environment from a very young age.

There is an urgent need to understand the outcome of our doings before we obliterate what is left of our environment. A small step taken today will ensure there is a tomorrow.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an apt way" with adverb for "apt"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...estic level can lead to their treatment in an apt way, thus reducing different kinds of pollu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26042941957 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4053422503 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117991077366 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379853409319 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340106443553 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671233489348 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145981790137 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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