Some people believe that prison is not an effective method of reducing crime, while others feel it helps to stop criminals from re-offending.
Discuss both views, and present your opinion.
Nowadays, the biggest worrying in communities is crime where this happen becoming the scary as the people. Some people say that the prison is not the best way to decreasing of this problem, despite the others opinion, just stop the criminals. There are several reasons about this matter.
On the one hand, the law from the rule of government about the crime is prison as punishment of it. Therefore todays, it is the one step to reducing this problem. For example, the thief who is hang around in one environment recently experience the trial to decide which punishment that is given . while that, the other people who are commit this offences will stop their plan action is due to their friend before. As result, no way becoming affective to falling this event, but we must struggle to avoid or limit their movement. In conclusion, the prison is the best punishment to people who did the crimes.
On other side, to stop the criminals is improbable because the offender from the own society and more population make the potential of the criminal is growing. There are several causes of this matter. The first, the people who have tendency following the modern era and do not have enough money to do that therefore they initiative to commit an offence such as thief or deception. The second, the less of work field encourage the people to do negative event in order to their necessary can enough. In addition, the psychopath who have a tendency to did a criminal or hardness where this type is mentally problem.
To sum up, the offences like crime and criminals can not to stop because these happen are natural in every places. And the biggest effect that make a highest influence as people to do that is a poor then minor problem is a psychological.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72638436482 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49667302659 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514657980456 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4391616259 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188284067084 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592284770472 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540576758846 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116496425613 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110783898799 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.