It is an ongoing debate that whether experts like doctors and engineers, should serve the country where they learnt their professional skills or the choice of working in any nation should be given to them. This essay will look at both sides of the argument before concluding that the latter opinion is more justified.
To begin with, some people believe that leaving a particular country after having learnt their skills is considered as disparagement to the nation. To them, people should pay the country back and one way to do this is improving it's economic status by working there.They believe that it is just a way of showing deference to the teachers of the country who taught them. Furthermore, when a person resides in a nation to get educated, he also gets encountered with the ways of living of its native people and its culture. Therefore, it seems appropriate to live there and serve the nation.
Despite the reasons given for staying in a country where one graduated and became an expert, giving them free will is more justifiable. No one should be forced to live in any country whether it's his motherland or some foreign country. Wherever a person wants to reside and work, he should be able to do that without facing any restrictions and this is the motto of the most prominent social service society, The human resources. Take for instance and example of a person who just completed his doctory in US and wants to help African people in curing their diseases. Now, one is very well aware that US is a developed nation and it doesn't require doctors as much needed by Africans. It is not absolute if the person is not even able to leave the country and serve those who are in actual need.
Moreover, there might be some countries which pay certain professionals more wages than those in which they've done their training. Hence, it is finer if a person wants to make more money in order to sustain his family or satisfy his own monetary needs.
To conclude, people should be given the right to choose any country they want to work in wheather it is the one they took training in or some other.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ng its economic status by working there.They believe that it is just a way of showin...
^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e forced to live in any country whether its his motherland or some foreign country....
^^^
Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...re that US is a developed nation and it doesnt require doctors as much needed by Afric...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...ssionals more wages than those in which theyve done their training. Hence, it is finer...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66310160428 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45716542568 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6566373876 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356550840857 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112436825676 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110674406095 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2212457173 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971696367109 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ng its economic status by working there.They believe that it is just a way of showin...
^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e forced to live in any country whether its his motherland or some foreign country....
^^^
Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...re that US is a developed nation and it doesnt require doctors as much needed by Afric...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...ssionals more wages than those in which theyve done their training. Hence, it is finer...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66310160428 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45716542568 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6566373876 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356550840857 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112436825676 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110674406095 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2212457173 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971696367109 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.