In modern times, many countries around the world have trained many people into professionals in the field of work such as doctors and engineers. While there are people who believe that those professionals should stay and work in the country where they have finished their training, I would argue that letting those people travel to countries that they want to work in would be more beneficial.
On the one hand, it is believed that doctors and engineers should work in the country that they have finished their training in because it has to fit with the country's environment. This is because many nations around the world have different illnesses and environmental conditions that might need different training in order to cure a particular disease or construct a house that can withstand the harsh conditions of that country. For example, in japan, building’s foundations have been reinforced so that they can withstand and combat low seismic level while in vietnam, the building will collapse since most of the house foundations are not heavily reinforced for earthquakes.
On the other hand, I believe that it will be more beneficial to let professionals travel to countries that they wanted to work in. Much knowledge that they have obtained in their country is transferable, which means the knowledge and experience that they have accumulated in their country can be useful in the nation that they wanted to work in. This can help many nations around the world that lack professions such as doctors and engineers by letting them work in those unfortunate countries. Hence, improve the reputation of the country and also be able to form an alliance with the country that they had helped. For instance, software developers are able to work anywhere in the world since their knowledge are globally taught around the world, and in vietnam, the government had allowed many companies to outsource many of their employees to work outside of vietnam, which in turns improved vietnam reputation in many countries around the world.
In conclusion, although there are people who want professionals to stay and work in the country where they have finished their training, I believe that letting them travel to the country that they want to work in will be more beneficial.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia
- At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 7.30460921844 329% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70722490138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405333333333 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2462065631 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.727272727 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0909090909 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426354497239 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211681764495 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136571792661 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318834409594 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853234496692 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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