There is no doubt that the children’s education and health are two of the most significant concern of parents throughout the world. This has led to a controversy of whether spending the time on doing homework or other kinds of activities is more fundamental for schoolers. While there are some strong arguments against the settling of homework, I still believe that it is a necessary aspect of education.
There are some reasons explain why some people argued that homework is a burden for children. Firstly, it is also crucial for students to have time for their social life and families. The children’s social skills, communication skills and soft skills are also needed to develop due to The fact that these can become their advantage for work life after school. Secondly, after school is a reasonable time for a child to pursue his or her hobbies and personal past times. As having spent eight hours of school for studying, students should be able to take their minds of work and enjoy the childhood. Finally, school day is already long enough, many parents would agree that the children are weary and requires some time to rest.
In spite of the base arguments, I support the view that homework has an important role to play in the schooling of children. Returning from school the lessons are still fresh in their minds. Therefore, it is easier to review what they have learned and also helps them remember better. Furthermore, doing homework and solving problems independently encourages the brain to apply what they have absorbed at school to finish the work. For example, when it comes to mathematics exercises, children need to read again and remember the formulas in order to solve them. Finally, as the knowledge is foreign, it is advisable for them to read the lesson before hand as homework to have a better understanding of the lessons the next day.
In conclusion, homework certainly has its drawbacks but I believe the benefits outweigh them in the long way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89614243323 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62774011172 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9418341157 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286318123195 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095169397902 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857092203681 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15304633391 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396809782013 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.