Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information through the internet and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
it is often said that school do not play crucial role to educate children,because internet can provide teenagers with a lot of information that is given at school.In my opinion,I absolutely disagree with this idea ,because of that in learning and practise of more complex ideas, internet is not adequate.
Firstly,it can tell the answer is right but ,it may not tell where th student went wrong.For example,majority of students who live in different countries try to perform their homework that is given by teacher by internet.As a result,they do not understand how to solve given task when it are asked by teachers.In other words,internet might not give content of result that is related to task.
Secondly,Schools are places where teenagers learn many social skills apart from academic education.Besides,there are also practical subject which students can learn best from teacher.For instance,experiments of physics of biology and physics are best learnt by teacher guiding you at every step in the school setting.What is more,teachers in scool give assignments ang regularly check them.This hepls the teachers to recognise the weak points of children and guide them accordingly.Morever,when students suffer from what could not solve task,teachers in school give them motivation and encouragement to deal with it.As a consequence,children may learn to tackle the hometask in a best way.
To sum up,some people are of opinion that internet play an important role in comparasion with school.However,I think that the internet never give enough knowledge to children as comparent to school where is place for students to acquire moral values such as tolerance and sharing.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42911877395 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64945696429 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.727533011 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.25 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 20.7667163134 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 7.06120827912 779% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193173547262 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122897149412 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579026351551 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122897149412 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579026351551 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.0946893788 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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