Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial for their future career and therefore others subjects such as music and sports are not important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a debated issue that some people claim while children should be solely taught subjects affecting positively their future career, the other subjects including music and sports should be neglected. I strongly do not agree with this opinion for following reasons.
First, along with professional subjects which are supposed to be crucial, subjects like music and sports has played vital roles in forming a well- rounded child. Interacting with music through singing or playing instruments would stimulate children's development which might foster their creativity, help them unwind after learning tensely various professional subjects. Accordingly, it is an inevitable fact that obesity rate among children has increased in contemporary lives, they do need sports be a significant part in schoolchildren' schedule. Not only do these outdoor activities strengthen children's physical health, but the children also gain a number of beneficial skills such as teamwork skill and communication skill as well.
More importantly, professional subjects taught in school are not enough for children to achieve their future success. In the era of industrializaion and modernization, children need to learn a wide range of soft skills, for examples, critical thinking, time management and presentation skill that would influence directly on the future path. Hence, the academic subjects just are the necessary conditions for children to chase their ideal jobs.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that the other subjects including music and sports should be considered as equal as the professional subjects in children's timetable due to certain advantages of these subjects and the insufficience of academic subjects on their future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68725868726 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0222955694 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7079559188 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.3 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420862152512 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160691644593 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963873356134 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27309170695 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697999248624 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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